Let's talk about some
French songs. Because, hey? Why not? Recently in one of my French
classes we examined a song entitled Le Déserteur, by Boris Vian.
This is an anti-war song, composed during France's war with Algeria
over the French colonization of that country. Here it is:
These are the lyrics, translated into English:
Mr. President
I'm writing you a letter
that perhaps you will read
If you have the time.
I've just received
my call-up papers
to leave for the front
Before Wednesday night.
Mr. President
I do not want to go
I am not on this earth
to kill poor people.
It's not to make you mad
I must tell you
my decision is made
I am going to desert.
Since I was born
I have seen my father die
I have seen my brothers leave
and my children cry.
My mother has suffered so,
that she is in her grave
and she laughs at the bombs
and she laughs at the worms.
When I was a prisoner
they stole my wife
they stole my soul
and all my dear past.
Early tomorrow morning
I will shut my door
on these dead years
I will take to the road.
I will beg my way along
on the roads of France
from Brittany to Provence
and I will cry out to the people:
Refuse to obey
refuse to do it
don't go to war
refuse to go.
If blood must be given
go give your own
you are a good apostle
Mr. President.
If you go after me
warn your police
that I'll be unarmed
and that they can shoot.
I'm writing you a letter
that perhaps you will read
If you have the time.
I've just received
my call-up papers
to leave for the front
Before Wednesday night.
Mr. President
I do not want to go
I am not on this earth
to kill poor people.
It's not to make you mad
I must tell you
my decision is made
I am going to desert.
Since I was born
I have seen my father die
I have seen my brothers leave
and my children cry.
My mother has suffered so,
that she is in her grave
and she laughs at the bombs
and she laughs at the worms.
When I was a prisoner
they stole my wife
they stole my soul
and all my dear past.
Early tomorrow morning
I will shut my door
on these dead years
I will take to the road.
I will beg my way along
on the roads of France
from Brittany to Provence
and I will cry out to the people:
Refuse to obey
refuse to do it
don't go to war
refuse to go.
If blood must be given
go give your own
you are a good apostle
Mr. President.
If you go after me
warn your police
that I'll be unarmed
and that they can shoot.
This song, and its message
of peace is persuasive for several reasons. For one, the music is
relatively simple, which means that many people are able to sing it,
which would contribute to its popularity and recognition. But the
biggest effect, of course, comes from the lyrics.
The deserter who is
“narrating” this song opens up with a plea to the president and
establishes himself as a polite man who has a strong moral opposition
to war. As he explains it, his purpose in life is not to kill other
people, which is why he is opposing his conscription. The way he
presents his argument is particularly striking. He did not say “I
don't like killing”, he expressed his beliefs in a more inspiring
way, one that suggests some moral enlightenment, “I am not on this
earth to kill poor people”.
The song continues to
paint a sad portrait of the deserter, who has lost both parents and
his siblings. But his hardships progress when he stands up for his
belief in peace and he continues to lose all that is dear to him as a
consequence.
And finally, when this man
has nothing left but his beliefs, he is going to walk across all of
France, spreading his message of peace and encouraging the people he
encounters to not go to war.
But it is the very end of
the song where it is at its most poignant. The deserter is a man with
nothing left to lose. A man who deserted, not because he was afraid
to die, but because he believes in peace, which he proves when he
proclaims that he is ready to go greet death and will go willingly.
The poem itself is powerful enough that he can draw a broad audience through simple, sometimes inspirational wording and expression of his view on a topic that most people are affected by in one way or another. The story of his character being broken bit by bit in relation to the war is heartbreaking and it almost comes as no surprise that he is willing to let his life be taken.
ReplyDeleteSometimes peaceful protest is the best way to show how people truly feel about their predicaments, which I believe is because it leaves the interpretation of and rebuttal against their (in)action up to the opposing party.
You translated this? Wow, I took 2 years of Spanish and well... I might be able to translate a sentence or two of Spanish, leave along an entire song! :D
ReplyDeleteAnyways, I think this is an interesting thing to identify the use of rhetoric in... many people ignore or just know some of the lyrics, but don't go to the point of deciphering messages like this so eloquently. War in particular and recruitment messages really take on a lot of interesting almost 'tug of war' use of rhetoric to get where they want to. We don't want to go to war, yet we want people to want to become involved in fighting for their country so they can create peace in an argument in a not so peaceful manner.